Aside from memorizing my speech, I only made very subtle changes. For instance, I removed filler words and upgraded my adjectives to make it sound more professional. The most drastic change was my movement. I made an effort to utilize the space around me while giving the speech.
Friday, November 9, 2018
Elevator Pitch 3
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OgPJN5DFTiI
I only received one comment on my Elevator Pitch 2.0. This person explained to me that I drastically improved my gestures and eye contact while giving the speech. In addition, they mentioned that I seemed more confident and trusted myself. I believe this has to do with the fact that I practiced more and made a conscious effort to maintain good eye contact and use gestures.
Aside from memorizing my speech, I only made very subtle changes. For instance, I removed filler words and upgraded my adjectives to make it sound more professional. The most drastic change was my movement. I made an effort to utilize the space around me while giving the speech.
Aside from memorizing my speech, I only made very subtle changes. For instance, I removed filler words and upgraded my adjectives to make it sound more professional. The most drastic change was my movement. I made an effort to utilize the space around me while giving the speech.
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Hey Zane! This was a great elevator pitch and I really enjoyed watching it. I really liked how you made sure to move around and use your hands when you talked because the pitch felt more interactive and engaging. You have definitively improved since your first post and conveyed your idea clearly. I look forward to reading more about your idea through the rest of this course.
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